Raissa: Blog Entry 3.3 Practice CAT #3: " In the article “The Net Is the Real world' the authors talk about the recent case of the teenager who killed himself after finding out th..."
I like That your thesis in highlighted and clearly stated. It is important to have the thesis stand out so that readers know what you will talk about. I also like thta you wrote more than two paragraphs, alot of the others wrote less. I also like that you excluded unimportant ideas. I recommend being a little more careful the next time you write a CATW. There are alot of little mistakes that can be corrected if you took your time to write it out. Not every paragraph has a clearly stated significant idea. It was hard to see where the summary ended and where your response begins. Each paragraph should have it's own topic. You must give examples of something similar to the article. Also, you should pay attention to grammar and spelling errors. Even if you write a great paper, little mistakes like grammar and spelling will get you a failing grade
I like That your thesis in highlighted and clearly stated. It is important to have the thesis stand out so that readers know what you will talk about. I also like thta you wrote more than two paragraphs, alot of the others wrote less. I also like that you excluded unimportant ideas.
ReplyDeleteI recommend being a little more careful the next time you write a CATW. There are alot of little mistakes that can be corrected if you took your time to write it out. Not every paragraph has a clearly stated significant idea. It was hard to see where the summary ended and where your response begins. Each paragraph should have it's own topic.
You must give examples of something similar to the article. Also, you should pay attention to grammar and spelling errors. Even if you write a great paper, little mistakes like grammar and spelling will get you a failing grade